personally I think its great, wish I had the talent ya have, it follows well, the repetition is a little much, but it's something put together well, really does need some variation, to the whole, but its good keep it up. your making a good way for your self,
You have talent, you are making the same mistake I make alot, by putting the overtones (the girls voice) to where it takes away from your lyrics, the talented voice work you have done made me listen in to a genre otherwise i don't care for.
Its very nice, would give it a 5 if it was a little longer, but hey leaves ya wanting more, well done.
I guess I Am your 51st view the guitar sounds great, but I think if ya had a sound re-work on the vocals, it WILL make a big difference, I could not make out what your saying, and I am sure you have some realty great lyrics.
Hey, first of all, thanks for reviewing!
Yeah, I agree with you, the vocal needs a "re-work". In fact, the problem is this: I can't sing. Although I have a good tuning, I really don't have any techniques. It sucks, because working on tuning is easy, but working on techniques and also my timbre is REALLY not.
About the lyrics, I'll put them at the description :D
Again, thanks for reviewing!
very nicely put together must have taken some time and thought. looking forward to your next hit
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